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It's perfect!!

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it's been years since the last update😭

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I've played through this multiple times and now that I've read the comments I suppose I too am waiting for an update 😭 pls come back. PLS. This is just *chefs kiss* 

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I'm guessing this game has been abandoned, considering the lack of updates on the game itself and the tumblr blog. Bummer... :(

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I have been here since the first release and I'm still patiently waiting for an update. Because I have attachment issues and I'm not ready to let this one go. T-T

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I just realised that the grandfathers name is edward amser, amser means time in welsh. Was this intended or a coincidence?

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Oooooooooo bro, noooooo! DAD!!! Can't wait for more. Awesome job on the prologue :D

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Very much enjoyed this! The humor and writing style fit nicely together. However, there was an issue with choosing to be nonbinary. Several times throughout the beginning I noticed you used singular words for a plural pronoun, for example; "Ah, but they has your hair," when it should be "Ah, but they have your hair,". Being nonbinary myself, I've met lots of people who made that mistake so no worries, it's pretty common, but just wanted to mention it if you wanted feedback! :)

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Sorry for asking this but... was this wip initially in the COG forum?

I understand that many authors there have switched to other programs... it's just that, reading this demo, I can't get rid of the feeling of familiarity and I think this is the 1st time I have read this here on itch 😅 (that or I may have just forgotten? Lol)

Very nice demo, btw ❤

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Hello!

Nope, sorry this is the first and only place I've posted TL. If you do happen to see this somewhere else, feel free to let me know! ^^ 

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I love Dad, he's such a cool guy

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Finished the prologue! Pretty interesting for an opening, already got me looking forward to seeing more XD. There's one little question, what's a "Customizable PC"? Player character or sth like that? :O

Hello! Yes, PC stands for "Player Character" that you can customize in terms of looks, personality, etc. :)

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I love this so much one of my favorite openings I've read honestly. Makes me supper excited to see what happens next and meet more people.

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That was a really long prologue, lol, but it was very enjoyable. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! 

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I think it's actually a good start ! the writing is nice and smooth even if the mc sound a tad bit too naive, even for an overprotected prince. Anyway, I still like it and I'll be waiting for the next update :)

( sorry if I made any mistake, english isn't my first language)

Thank you! I did lean towards more naivety for the child scenes to introduce lore, though I will try to be mindful to not make them sound like a ditz in future chapters lol

And you're fine! :) I'm glad to hear from you. 

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I don't understand this game. Why does my personality at the age of six affect my personality traits 16 years later? Especially when you're portraying ten year olds as far less mature than they actually are. If I don't know who I am yet at 10, surely I don't at 6.